{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26496017","dateCreated":"1283194868","smartDate":"Aug 30, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jsutton26","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jsutton26","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222961183\/jsutton26-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26496017"},"dateDigested":1531973783,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daisy Miller Description Jonathan Sutton","description":"In the beginning, my first impression of Daisy was that she is a conservative, fancy, young lady. As I kept reading I noticed that she contains some characteristics that I would never would of guess. Daisy makes eye contacts with Winterbourne in the park for over than half an hour knowing he had double the age. Daisy has a flirty attitude and rather slutty. She demonstrates this the way she acts, the way she talks, the way she dresses. Daisy knows she is a very attractive girl and she uses this as a male poison. As you read you notice that Daisy knows how to flirt, knows how to act with a fully grown man. This can have various meanings but in my personal opinion is because she has experience. Daisy tells Winterbourne to take her to several places. For example the boat, and Daisy asks Winterbourne if he would like to fly to Rome with Daisy\u2019s family and Daisy. This creates illusions for Winterbourne; it causes him to think that she actually wants a serious relationship with him. By Winterbourne thinking that Daisy wants a serious relationship with him, it causes him to create some feelings towards her. Daisy talks to Winterbourne as if she knew him all her life when it was just hours ago at the park. Yet, after everything when Winterbourne declines the offer of going to Italy with Daisy and her family she just get tired of him and leaves him. Also, Daisy is a very controlling person. Daisy makes Winterbourne wait outside the hotel and when she speaks she is very demanding and very direct making Winterbourne loose his pride. She controls the time they are together. At last, I believe that Daisy is a flirty, rather slutty, controlling, and a faker in order to get guys, and in my own experience I wouldn\u2019t date a girl like that.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"26454361","dateCreated":"1283048634","smartDate":"Aug 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"daniaiz","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/daniaiz","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26454361"},"dateDigested":1531973783,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daniel Aizenman Daisy miller","description":"From my perspective, Daisy Miller might be rich but she doesn\u2019t look like it. She decides to ride a boat with a stranger that she has met for only 1.5 hours. Daisy is a very talkative and very social person. She is a person that talks to everyone. We can see that when the narrator says \u201c She was talking to him as if she had know him a long time \u201c, (page 322) She is also a not very well educated person; instead of thanking Winterbourne, she starts to wine and to insult him. We can see this when Daisy starts saying to winterbourne\u201d I think you are horrid\u201d, (pg335). I can consider Daisy like a slot because she is seeing more than 1 man at the same time. We can also see that Daisy disloyal to winterbourne and Winterbourne is loyal to her. We can see that Daisy is disloyal to winterbourne when Mrs. Costello says:\u201d The girl goes about alone with her foreigners. As to what happens further, you must apply elsewhere information. She has picked up half-a dozen of the regular Roman fortune hunters, and she takes them about to people\u2019s houses. When she comes to a party she brings with her a gentlemen with a good deal of manner and a wonderful mustache,(pg 336)Having said this, on my opinion Daisy is being a \u201cbitch\u201d with winterbourne because she is playing with Winterbourne feelings and she is making Winterbourne have feelings for her, which I consider mean and unloyal. Daisy is a very talkative and very social person. She is a person that talks to everyone. We can see that","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26454379","body":"erase the last part "we can see that"","dateCreated":"1283048689","smartDate":"Aug 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"daniaiz","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/daniaiz","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"26467951","body":"Daniel,
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\nThis is over a day late.
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\nTalk to me tomorrow.
\n
\nThanks,
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\nWebster","dateCreated":"1283121602","smartDate":"Aug 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26431611","dateCreated":"1282935135","smartDate":"Aug 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pprada","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pprada","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1315457538\/pprada-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26431611"},"dateDigested":1531973784,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daisy Miller response","description":"
\n In my point of view, Daisy Miller is as Mrs. Costello says she is. I do believe she is a new rich, and even though she may have lots of money she still has no class. She proves her uncultivated ways by exposing all of her social matters. A lady of her age should certainly not be talking about her ways with other men. Daisy, however has no problem sharing this type of information for a guy she barely has know for a couple of hours. \u201c I have always had\u2026 a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s society\u201d (page 324). This gives me a slutty impression of her and even though she may be good looking that doesn\u2019t mean that gives her the right to go from one guy to another. Also, I find daisy to be manipulative and takes advantage of men. We can see how she plays with Winterbourne throughout the story. Especially when she wants to go on a boat ride with him. She wants Winterbourne to ridicule himself just for the sake of it. \u201c Oh, I hoped you would a fuss. .. I don\u2019t care to go now\u201d (page 333). Daisy is clearly playing with Winterbourne giving him fake hopes by telling him that they would have a nice time, but in the end she only lead him to disillusion and humiliation. I find this to be very mean and immature. I finally I find Daisy to be very social and easy to talk to. We can see this to the way she talks to Winterbourne at the beginning of the story \u201c She was talking to him \u201cas if\u201d she had know him a long time \u201c she had only known him for no more than one hour and yet she was able to talk to him about her family, issues, her flirts, and her interests with no sense of shame at all.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26468113","body":"Alright Paula,
\n
\nThanks for answering, but I wish that you had answered earlier instead of on the day it was due. That way you could have fixed up the grammatical errors and helped me out with some of the confusions I have with your response.
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1283122031","smartDate":"Aug 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26424799","dateCreated":"1282928462","smartDate":"Aug 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"arifishman95","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/arifishman95","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26424799"},"dateDigested":1531973784,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daisy Miller Ari Fishman","description":"When reading Daisy Miller, we are capable of seeing how she reacts to some situations and understand many of her characteristics. First, we see that her social capabilities are very wide, since in the first chapter we comprehend how she makes conversation with a completely stranger guy (Winterbourne). Lately, in the second chapter, we figure out, that her social skills extend also in the flirting branch. She has a tendency of talking with confidence about her personal life, and in many times, she mentioned that she \u201chas been with many men\u201d. Also, when they were at the Chillon Castle, she asked many deep questions to Winterbourne, which clearly shows that for her, \u201cshame\u201d is not a word.
\nFurthermore, in these two chapters, we see that this young lady is very mysterious. Her attitudes and her constant changes of mood, make her look very puzzling. For example, in the Castle, when Winterbourne told her he was almost leaving, she changed her mood very quickly and ended up being completely quite all the way back home. Also, we can see that Winterbourne thinks that she is a unique American lady, and he refers that he doesn\u2019t know why. Finally, we could say, that many of Miss Miller\u00b4s characteristics that we infer as readers, are based on the reputation she has. The mystifying part is not only what Winterbourne thinks about her, but mainly why his aunt, Mrs. Costello refuses to know her, and disapprover her entire family. Many times during the second chapter, Mrs. Costello bewares Winterbourne of Daisy Miller.
\nLastly, we know that Daisy Miller\u00b4s spontaneity is what captivates Winterbourne the most. Her very extravagant temperament and her readiness to any new situation make this character very original. For example, when she said that he wanted to visit the Chillon Castle, she was already expecting of Winterbourne to take her there, causing a sort of awkward position to the young man. This quality of Daisy could be what charms us the most as readers and obviously, Winterbourne as the main character.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26468151","body":"Ari,
\n
\nThis is decent, but you really waited too long to answer. You could have made this better if you answered ealier.
\n
\nNext time,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1283122117","smartDate":"Aug 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26410653","dateCreated":"1282888056","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"taeyang","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/taeyang","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1223342653\/taeyang-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26410653"},"dateDigested":1531973784,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daisy Miller","description":"Daisy Miller who is indelicate, and acts extravagant, she meets a guy who is really gentle his name is Winterborun. Winterbourn loves Daisy Miller since he sees her at the first time. \u201cThey were wonderfully pretty eyes; and, indeed, Winterbourne had not seen for a long time anything prettier than his fair countrywomen`s various features- her complexion, her nose, her ears, her teeth\u201d (Page 322). He tells to Mrs.Costello about her, and Mrs.Costello says that she is vulgar girl. Because she doesn't repect in the party with old men, and dating a lot of guys. But she doesn't realize that that things are rude.
\n\u201cI have always had\u2026a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s society,\u201d (pg. 324). I think she shows her as perfect as she can, but the way she shows herself is indelicate. Winterbourn studies from her that in the world there is people who are like Daisy miller and they don't care about other's gazes, so they do watever they want to do. I think Daisy Miller is a "normal" girl, as same as others in that age, the only difference is the way of how she shows her.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26468057","body":"Brian,
\n
\nThis really is a bit short and there are many mistakes here. I want you to answer earlier next time so you have a chance to fox the problems.
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1283121885","smartDate":"Aug 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"26514781","body":"ok
\ncuz i worte it but when i clicked "post" my internet was gone, so i had to redo it..","dateCreated":"1283231388","smartDate":"Aug 30, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"taeyang","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/taeyang","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1223342653\/taeyang-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26408901","dateCreated":"1282881104","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"joseph86","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/joseph86","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26408901"},"dateDigested":1531973785,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"daisy miller","description":"\u201cThey were wonderfully pretty eyes; and, indeed, Winterbourne had not seen for a long time anything prettier than his fair countrywomen`s various features- her complexion, her nose, her ears, her teeth\u201d (Page 322)
\nThis is a brief description of Daisy miller, form Winterbourne`s perspective. I also think that daisy miller is pretty and she knows that because she knows that men like her do that is why I think that Daisy Miller is kind of a player. \u201cI have always had\u2026a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s society,\u201d (pg. 324).
\nI also think that daisy miller is has a rebel side. Just the fact that she changed her name shows a sign of rebeldy against her parents. \u201c\u201c Her name is daisy Miller!\u201d cried the child \u201cbut that isn\u2019t her real name; that isn\u2019t her name on the cards.\u201d\u201d (Page 323) This quote also shows that \u201cDaisy\u201d has significance to it. I take it to be that she is a pretty little flower, innocent, and humble all at the same time. I think that Daisy is innocent because she agrees tot go to the castle with winterbourne as soon as they met. This shows us that she doesn\u2019t get the horrors of the real world. I think that she is humble because she shows more interest in Winterbourne and tries to change subject as soon as his brother and Winterbourne start talking about her as shown in page 323:
\n\u201cHer real name is Anie P. miller\u201d the boy went on.
\n\u201cAsk him his name\u201d said the sister, indicating Winterbourne
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\nWith all these actions and portrays I think that daisy miller is a very complex young women. She has a humble, innocent, rebel and gorgeous all at the same time in a young women\u2019s body.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26468003","body":"Joseph,
\n
\nThanks for answering. I want you to answer earlier next time. There are quite a few mistakes here that need fixing and I don't think that you gave yourself enough time to do this.
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1283121734","smartDate":"Aug 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26408603","dateCreated":"1282879892","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ereiche","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ereiche","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1226183145\/ereiche-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26408603"},"dateDigested":1531973785,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Erik Reiche response","description":" As one reads Daisy Miller: A Study, one can gradually see, through Winterbourne\u2019s point of view, Daisy Miller\u2019s personality. By Daisy\u2019s actions, it is clear that she is a tease and a really indecisive person.
\n In the first chapters, it slowly becomes clear that Daisy is a tease when it comes to the relationship she has with Winterbourne. When they meet for the first time, Ms. Miller is such a tease, that she talks to Winterbourne but doesn\u2019t even look at him. \u201cThis pretty American girl, however, on hearing Winterbourne's observation, simply glanced at him; she then turned her head and looked over the parapet, at the lake and the opposite mountains\u201d(pg. 321) Even though Ms. Miller was interested in having a conversation and possibly flirting with Winterbourne, she played hard to get, and didn\u2019t even look at him. Daisy is also a tease when she is talking to Winterbourne and says: \u201cI have always had\u2026a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s society,\u201d (pg. 324). This can be interpreted as an indirect tease, where Daisy is telling winterbourne that she has experience with gentlemen and that winterbourne might become part of that list of gentleman.
\n As one continues to see Daisy through Winterbourne\u2019s point of view, it becomes obvious that Ms. Miller is a really indecisive girl. When daisy is talking to Winterbourne and Eugenio comes, we can clearly see her indecisiveness. First, she seems really exited and says: \u201cI'm going to that old castle " (pg. 326), but then see rapidly changes her mind and says, \u201cI don't care to go now\u201d (pg.333)
\n Through Daisy\u2019s actions, it is clear that she is a tease and an indecisive girl. Her actions, revel many key aspects of her personality, which helps us understand her in a deeper and greater way.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26432927","body":"Great Erik,
\n
\nA couple of things:
\n1) Make sure that you write in the present tense when you are analyzing texts. You keep jumping between the past and present.
\n2) You repeat the word 'tease' three times in the first three sentences. Try to mix up you vocabulary a bit and find alternatives.
\n3)"revel" ???
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1282937439","smartDate":"Aug 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26405875","dateCreated":"1282874123","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Linndzy","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Linndzy","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1290198368\/Linndzy-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26405875"},"dateDigested":1531973785,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Lindsey Pent response","description":" While reading Daisy Miller the Study I found that it was very obvious why they called it a study. It is very apparent that Winterbourne is the one studying Daisy Miller. He is very interested in her and leans little by little what she is really like. Winterbourne discovers many things about her, some pleasant, and others, not so pleasant.
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\n Whenever I think about some of the things that Daisy Miller does with regard to the time period, I think that she is very out of control and in a way she seems like a slut. There are so many things she does that I don\u2019t even think that I would be able to do even today. Her attitude is somewhat annoying and she appears in some parts of the book to be full of her self. When she meets Winterbourne for the first time she pays a lot of attention to the way that she appears and how her dress looks, things like that. \u201cThe young lady inspected her flounces and smoothed her ribbons again\u2026\u201d (pg 322) She seems very concerned with the way she appears to other people, even people she has hardly met. Another thing about her that really drives me crazy is when she and Winterbourne do begin to talk to each other and she starts bragging about her \u201cgentlemen friends\u201d and how many she has. \u201c\u2019I have more friends in New York than in Schenectady \u2013 more gentlemen friends\u2026 I have always had,\u2019 she said, \u2018a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s in society,\u201d (pg 324). No one says things like that to someone the first time that they meet them unless they are trying to brag or something like that. And that is something about Daisy Miller that I just can\u2019t stand. Daisy Miller isn\u2019t my favorite person, and to be honest I was kind of glad when she died, not to be mean or anything, it\u2019s just the truth. And that is all I have to say about Daisy Miller.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26432787","body":"Linsdey,
\n
\nThanks for answering. I feel that there are some mistakes here, however, that could have been avoided if you had done a little proof-reading. Among these...
\n-'Daisy Miller the Study'--- what is the actual name and how should we punctuate short story titles in general.
\n- 'He is very interested in her and leans little by little'
\n- 'full of her self'
\n- 'the way that she appears and how her dress looks, things like that.'
\n- 'unless they are trying to brag or something like that.'
\n- 'to be honest I was kind of glad when she died, not to be mean or anything, it\u2019s just the truth.'
\n
\nI also think that you can find better terms, alternatives to describe Daisy than 'slut.'
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1282937163","smartDate":"Aug 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26401521","dateCreated":"1282865574","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"meladovelado","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meladovelado","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1317260331\/meladovelado-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26401521"},"dateDigested":1531973785,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daisy Miller Reponse","description":"Daisy Miller: A Study is a short story in which a young man of 27 years of age called Frederick Winterbourne analyzes a beautiful young lady whose name is Annie Miller but likes to be called Daisy Miller. When he first meets this pretty young America, decides to advance farther by initiating a conversation with her instead of retreating. At first, Daisy displays innocence and is very timid by simply glancing at him and turning her head in several directions without having direct eye contact with Mr. Winterbourne. She also displays embarrassment by smoothing out the knots on her dress, and gradually increasing the benefit of her glance. The narrator uses the following words to describe this pretty young girl: \u201cWinterbourne had not seen for a long time anything prettier than this fair countrywoman\u2019s various features-her complexion, her nose, her ears, her teeth\u2026he was addicted to observing and analyzing it.\u201d (Pg.322) Clearly, Mr. Winterbourne is very aware of her feminine beauty and her quiet and tranquil attitude. He studies and analyzes every move that this young girl makes. During the first and second parts of this story, Daisy Miller seems to be a soft, delicate, beautiful, feminine, young, flirty, and humorous girl that grabs Mr. Winterbourne\u2019s attention instantly.
\n Even though Daisy Miller seems as an angel released from the sky, she reflects a new personality during the period of time that Mr. Winterbourne departs from Vevey. When he returns, he figures out that Daisy Miller has been very flirtatious with all types of gentlemen. Ms. Costello uses the following words to describe the young girl that he had fallen for a few months ago: \u201c She has picked up half-a-dozen of the regular Roman fortune-hunters, and she takes them about to people\u2019s houses. When she comes to a party she brings with her a gentleman\u2026\u201d (Pg. 336) These words clearly reflect that Daisy is viewed as abominably because she takes older men to parties and hangs out with them often. In that society, seeing a young woman hanging out alone with an older man and without a chaperone, is clearly viewed as an inadequate action. Daisy Miller meets a pleasant man called Giovanelli, and is her new intimate friend. They go everywhere together, and the Roman crowd bestowed much attention at the odd couple. \u201cHe wondered what on earth had been in Daisy\u2019s mind when she proposed to expose herself, unattended, to its appreciation.\u201d (Pg.340) People obviously started viewing this young lady very badly because of her egregious and audacious behavior. Daisy Miller is used to doing what she wants, being the center of attention, and doesn\u2019t really care about anybody\u2019s opinion. It is clear that she has a greater authority compared to her mother and her brother because she takes her own decisions and she can\u2019t look ahead for the consequences. This is why she decides to ignore to Mr. Winterbourne\u2019s advice when she is going to leave with Mr. Giovanelli, even though she knows she\u2019s taking the risk of catching the fever. Unfortunately, her innocence takes over her and this is why she dies. Daisy Miller is an interesting character because we really don\u2019t know if this young coquette was always uncultivated and indelicate and Mr. Winterbourne was blinded by love and couldn't look at the truth; or if she changesd during the short period that she was away from Mr. Winterbourne.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26432573","body":"Melanie,
\n
\nThanks for answering. You obviously put some work into this and it shows. You also write well, using strong clear language.
\n
\nI was, however, hoping for more interpretation from you. I wanted to know what you thought of Daisy as a girl, an individual. Instead you seemed to just re-tell me what happened in the story.
\n
\nPlease re-read the question and see if you can understand my objections.
\n
\nThanks,
\n
\nWebster","dateCreated":"1282936724","smartDate":"Aug 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"davidgarethw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/davidgarethw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"26398749","dateCreated":"1282859820","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"mekster","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mekster","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222961126\/mekster-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/davidgarethw-books-b.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/26398749"},"dateDigested":1531973786,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Jaime Mekler Daisy Miller response","description":"I believe Daisy to be a tease, to be very manipulative and uses her looks to her advantage. I find her to be very indecisive as well. For example, we can see how she\u2019s manipulating winterbourne by making him make a fuss for her \u201cOh, I hoped you would make a fuss!\u201d(333) Daisy is making a fool out of winterbourne and possibly making him feel uncomfortable just so she could get a few laughs. \u201c I hope you are disappointed, or disgusted, or something!\u201d(333). We see from this that Daisy wants Winterbourne feel something and she\u2019s just playing with him making him uncertain of his feelings for her. I how ever also find her to be a social outgoing girl, I just get the vibe from her that I could spend hours talking to her, maybe not about something meaningful or significant in any way, but I am certain that I would enjoy my time with her. I can see this from the way that she talks to Winterbourne. She has known him for no more than a couple of hours, and still \u201cshe talked to Winterbourne as if she had known him a long time.\u201d Another characteristic that interests me about Daisy Is her uncertainty and unpredictability. At the beginning of the story she is fixed on going to the old castle in the mountaintops, then as the night progresses she suddenly changes her mind and decides that she is eager to go on a boat ride instead. Then out of the blue Daisy no longer wants to do neither but just wants to go home leaving Winterbourne (blueballs) \u201cpuzzled.\u201d Finally I feel that Daisy is a bit of a tramp enjoying men\u2019s company a little too much. .\u201cI have always had\u2026a great deal of gentlemen\u2019s society,\u201d (pg. 324). She\u2019s not afraid about sharing this type of information with a man she just met, and to me, Daisy might be kind of shameless and the fact that she hangs out with too many guys, takes something away from her initial appeal.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"26430239","body":"Good Jaime,
\n
\nClear and pointedly written... A couple of mistakes that might have been avoided if you had proofread a little more thoroughly. 'Winterbourne' is always capitalized, "enjoying men\u2019s company" should be "enjoying mens' company', and 'however' is one word.
\n
\nCan you fix this?
\n
\nThanks,
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